I am a Year 9 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Some very interesting descriptions in your writing. I like how you used an elephant as a comparison for the size. Make sure you are using your capital letters and full stops in your writing to achieve full marks.
Hi Malia
ReplyDeleteSome very interesting descriptions in your writing. I like how you used an elephant as a comparison for the size. Make sure you are using your capital letters and full stops in your writing to achieve full marks.
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